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Wednesday, February 8, 2012



Lets see some comments, What one do you feel is the strongest and why, and which one do you think is a close second and why? Also, what can I do to each of those to make them a stronger piece?

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  1. I have three favorites:

    Page 1: first and last
    Page 2: 2nd

    They best incorporate the flame with the title. Only concern with the first one is the starkness of the black square around the flame.

    I was thinking last night about the intro, and we could start with video of a flame - super close up, and then fade/animate in the logo. For the audio, we could have a montage of the kids' voices overlapping, starting really quiet and getting louder, as the energy of the flame picks up and the BAM the title comes in. If we used the kids voices, then we could also do something cool with the audio waveform if we choose that icon. There are some plugins in AfterEffects that literally display the wave form of what is being heard - could have a lot of energy.

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  2. I know we talked about these drawings on Thursday. I'm looking forward to the additional renditions.

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